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Re: Thirteen
Thirteen Bravo's. Very Good work!
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Haunting Darkness
Bravo! You really know how to capture a feeling and/or image. Keep it up.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Issues - Deleted
Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring. Keep it up.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Imagine This
Beautifull. And what a suprising end. This is the best prose I've read for this week. Excellent work
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: What You Meant To Her
It's totally impossible to review any of it. It's beautifull. Perfect. Goodluck.
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hollow Bones
It's beautifull. And the ending you intend to add works well for me.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: for ever unknown
A good poem. To whoever this poem was aimed at (he/she with the evil smile) , I despise him/her too. That means you reached your goal. Keep writing and goodluck.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo
Literature is suppose to entertain. You've done exactly that. Sorry, I can't review this, I'm too busy lmao-ing.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Unbreakable
Thank you guys for your usefull comments. Yes I agree with all that's said. Raz, I believe that love and friendship co-exist in a relationship. One holds no water without ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: ---
The characters are real enough to me. I admire the way you give a sneak preview of the real conflict. The deeper emotions that are hidden. This could be a ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: I Should've Been a Star
Great lyrics. maybe because it's easy to relate to. Especially when you're some or other type of artist. I wish I could here you perform the song. Great stuff.
Dec 30, 2010
