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Ashley529

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thirteen

    Thirteen Bravo's. Very Good work!

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haunting Darkness

    Bravo! You really know how to capture a feeling and/or image. Keep it up.

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Issues - Deleted

    Absolutely beautifull. Very inspiring. Keep it up.

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Imagine This

    Beautifull. And what a suprising end. This is the best prose I've read for this week. Excellent work

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: What You Meant To Her

    It's totally impossible to review any of it. It's beautifull. Perfect. Goodluck.

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hollow Bones

    It's beautifull. And the ending you intend to add works well for me.

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: for ever unknown

    A good poem. To whoever this poem was aimed at (he/she with the evil smile) , I despise him/her too. That means you reached your goal. Keep writing and goodluck.

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo

    Literature is suppose to entertain. You've done exactly that. Sorry, I can't review this, I'm too busy lmao-ing.

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Unbreakable

    Thank you guys for your usefull comments. Yes I agree with all that's said. Raz, I believe that love and friendship co-exist in a relationship. One holds no water without ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ---

    The characters are real enough to me. I admire the way you give a sneak preview of the real conflict. The deeper emotions that are hidden. This could be a ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Should've Been a Star

    Great lyrics. maybe because it's easy to relate to. Especially when you're some or other type of artist. I wish I could here you perform the song. Great stuff.

    Dec 30, 2010


If a million people say a foolish thing, it is still a foolish thing.
— Anatole France