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Very nice. Very, very nice. It's just so...remarkable. The symmetry is stunning. The word choice is something I could never think of. It's full of beauty and disgust. I love ...

An interesting idea. A bit cliche, but still interesting. If you continued with the part about taking over Microsoft, that would be good. You've got some spelling and grammar errors, ...

Just FYI, the biography is so long 'cause the minimum amount of words was something like 400. Sorry, but I forgot to mention that. Forgive me for commenting on my ...

Thanks everyone for the nice comments and constructive criticism. I cannot say how much that kind of thing means to me in my writing. as fore speling mistckes, im justt ...

Very nice, very beautiful. Well, I've got no constructive criticism, but I liked it!

I appreciate everybody's constructive criticism. Thank you! But just FYI, it has an adrupt ending because it was late at night when I wrote this and I REALLY had to ...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. It's sad, but at the end, you can't help but feel happy for the child.

I thank you all for your kind words about my story. **tear** I don't care if you're being honest or just taking pity on me...I just like compliments! Crysi actually ...

Very nice. It made me think. I have no constructive criticism, but I liked it.

This was very interesting, but kinda short. It's a really good introduction. I know my review isn't very constructive, but I liked this story.

Very nice. The rhymes (sp?) were very creative. I never really got a chance to thank my chair for all of its hard work. Thank you, chair.

Beautiful. And sad. It's been a long time since I've seen anything like this. But it really says something about all of the horrors in the world. Very well-written. Bravo.

I can totally relate. Which one of us hasn't shoved a battery up their nose? What? No one but me? Oh dear... I enjoyed this one. Tramatic childhood experiences...good times, ...

This had good details. I especially enjoy the whole "transformation" thing, and the boy's prejudice against humankind. To me, it was very well written. But what do I know? I'm ...