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Hey, Mea! Thanks for the review, you made some good points about my work and I'll be sure to straighten them out when I edit it. Thanks again! Seeya.

Hey there! Thanks for the review, I 100% agree that some paragraphs are quite an info dump. Also, great advice about how to 'introduce' the facts, I'll keep it in ...

fanbase...shhhh

Awesome, thanks again.

Hey, Drac! I'm really glad you're enjoying my work, it means a lot. Thanks for pointing out those few inconsistencies, I have edited and re-published the new version. Should be ...

Thanks, brah

@Dracula @LoyalDay @AlyTheBookworm @reikann @Eternity @Casanova @tswizzy22

Hey, thanks for the review. It seems several people weren't too keen on my first paragraph so I suppose I should alter it a little. If you would be so ...

Hey Cas! Thanks for the review. I appreciate the good things you said about my post, it means a lot. The point you made about this post where it all ...

Hey Aly! Thanks for the review. I appreciate your points about how I display Alex in the end, I'll think about changing it. As for the woman holding the man's ...

Sure. But the imagery needs work. There needs to be some emotive words and descriptions. But this is just opinion, if you don't want to change it then nobody is ...

Hey Drac! Thanks for reviewing again. About your first point, I want to write Alex as a hardened yet inexperienced character. I did change the text though, you were right ...

@Dracula @LoyalDay @AlyTheBookworm @reikann @Eternity

Sure. First thing I'd like to point out is that the repetition of 'I had a dream' is very similar to that of Martin Luther King's 'I have a dream', ...

Hey there again! I realised as soon as I posted this work that I capitalised 'police', it must've just been a subconscious action, fixed it though. I'm glad you pointed ...