Armagan

but something cleverly funny popped in my head and I couldn’t resist laughing. Cleverly funny - this doesn't really work together, get rid of the cleverly maybe? from Max but ...

I would love to review this, also, I really like what I've read so far, now to review! "Ah, life slips through our fingers," I said to Callie. She was ...

I'm going to be 100% honest with you, but this is only my opinion, i am not a big fan on a preface but then this is not my story, ...

I would gladly review this! :D “Come on, or we'll be late for class.” She pulled my arm as she leaded me to our sixth period British Literature class in ...

First of all, i would just like to say i really liked this and thoroughly enjoyed it! Also, sorry if i repeat advice already given to you :lol: But, now ...

First I'll give my opinion overall on it, then I'll give some advice (: Well, i really enjoyed this, i felt as if i was transported into this girls mind, ...

I honestly don't think there's much i can say to improve this! So I'll just give my opinion on a few things :) The shallow people seemed to pass her ...

First of all, i am not so good at the grammer so i wont be any use there, BUT i do like to comment on the ideas used in stories. ...

First of all, I'd just like to make this clear, i thoroughly enjoyed it. I can see why some may have thought it to be confusing, but i understood it ...