Armadian

I want the flute part then beause if u don't I will whack u!

I liked this.I haven't realy heard Hansel and Gredel before.But this is good I mean great.

I like this and since I know u this is totally u.

I like this it has inspired me some how but it reflects on when I was depressed.

Alex when will u get me the trumpet part for this song or the clarinet.Either way get it fo r me.

U really do rule.Really Really rule.

I hope I did it better than before.

I like u do this every summer huh?

Like I said and everyone else said if u are going to rhyme do all of it rhyming.Don't have it some here and some there it kinda makes it childish.Hard ...

I liked this I can't wait for u to have the rest of the song on here.*sits on a bench and waits*

this tells what really happens to people thaat make mistakes.

Yep u should get rid of the rhyming.Right I am ur friend right.Get rid of the rhyming and u should be ok till Brad gets in this.

U still are weird.U know u are really scaring me at school ok, ok.I liked this poem I will give it a 4 and a half star.

This is very inspring to me.

I liked how u put this to gether u might want to come up wthur own title that shows how u fell about this piece of writing.