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Re: Lily (Part 1)
This story is downright disturbing. It makes my stomach churn with unease. I love it. You've taken how innocent a child can be and twisted it into a dark, disturbing ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: The thoughts of Day and Night
"I am day, my days are full of light. but that doesn't mean I am happy. people dance under my sun's sweet rays but that doesn't mean I want them ...
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: The Waiting Room
"And you just know that if these walls had eyes, they would cry with you in sadness, and beam at you in your happiness." You've already set the mood at ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Your Beauty
What I got from this poem is a "Beauty's on the inside" message. A beautiful poem with a sweet message. You're reminding the reader that even though the beauty that ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: Normal
A person who wants to fit in, but can't A person who wants to be treated fairly by society, but isn't. Anyone who has ever felt like they don't fit ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops
The definition of loneliness is this story. The "I wear makeup to be like other girls" was a bit cliche, but it did help me understand the character's insecurities. I ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: My Brother James
This story wasn't just horror, it was the definition of grief and regret. The relationship between the two siblings was amazing. And the guilt the sibling felt for killing their ...
Sep 27, 2021
