Areida

I love all your YWS fanfictions, Griffypoo. They are the coolest. :mrgreen:

Interesting you perceive it that way, Grif. For me, it was about growing up. I'm scared to death of it. I love my family and my friends and my school, ...

Not a problem at all! I had a good time reading it. :D

Hehe. I guess I should just keep making my stuff so sappy that people don't have the heart to rip it to shreds. Except then... I'd stink. So um. Yes. ...

I figured it was part of the poem, but since it was titled "In Memory of Kelsey" and had so much raw emotion in it, it felt like a eulogy ...

Some really beautiful, poignant language in here, gummy... I would quote favorite parts, but then I'd end up quoting most of the poem. I'm very sorry. You'll be in my ...

Lyndsey, I totally get what you're saying about the whole "man of God" thing. It's one of those things that's really nice to see in real life, but is kind ...

No problem. I'm really behind on my critiquing. *glances sheepishly at Snoink* How's your NaNo progressing? I mean, besides your astronomical wordcount. :P

I've been promising you I'd comment for what, more than two weeks now? Well here I am, finally getting around to it. Sorry I'm such a lazy dork face. XD ...

The end is perfect. I love it. :mrgreen:

“Come on,” Emily turns and climbs the ladder to the platform that is our tree house. SEE???

Sorry I still haven't done this. I stink, I know. Just wanted to give this a bump up so hopefully someone else will be reading it and commenting while I'm ...

*smacks head* That's where I read it! Well then I stick by Strunk and White. Screw dictionary.com. :P

The only cadets I want to babysit are the West Point ones. Send in some of those! :P Seriously though... shouldn't the "alright"s be "all right"? That's something I've never ...

Not even evil grammatical errors???