Areida

Hey BBB! Sorry it's taken me eight gajillion million years to get around to commenting on this. I do see that you've gotten one of Cal's yummy critiques, so naturally ...

Hey Trident! Finally getting to your other request! You didn't disappoint, either; this was chock-full of lovely, lovely dialogue, so I thank you for not posting something that would torture ...

So, in order: * Giant Jesus Fish. *gigglesnort* * Hooray for show-don't-tell character contrast! She started down the first step, with her hand in the air, searching for the railing. ...

Hey Trident! Sorry it's taken me a thousand and one nights to get to reading and commenting on your tale (haha, get it? two shakes of a lamb's tail - ...

Goodliness: "loner with friends" Oh-so-true. I love how much this reeks of real life. Oftentimes that's difficult, to write so honestly, even painful, depending on who you are and what ...

I am having way too much fun reading these. The title is great too, though I haven't made the connection yet. I'm sure it will be brilliant, though. :D “What’s ...

From one extemper to another: HECKS YES! High fives all around for the awesomeness of the Sam! I know some of your critiquers aren't fully getting it, but please, please, ...

Interesting. I'm curious about how this is going to turn out. Some random-ish comments: The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Pealing/flakey - - ...

Okay... so... I know I said I was waiting to comment on this, because I didn't know how to comment without just babbling endlessly about how amazing you are, but ...

Hi Suz! I have been dying to get to these for ages, so I'm excited that I finally made it - at last!. I had no idea what to expect ...

I won't engage in any kind of detailed discussion about style, because I'd just be fooling myself if I thought I understood poetic form, but I will say that I'm ...

Hey choco! You requested this one a while back, so apologies for not getting to it sooner. :D I like the concept here. I think you've got an original thing ...

Hello 'Fina! Major apologies for the tardiness of this review. Real life seems to be taking up more and more time these days; it's terribly pesky. :P Since it looks ...

Two things: The SPEW Gryphon II activated it's thrusters. Its, not it's. The SPEW Commandos moved inside, all ready coordinating with Adelaide as to where to put their equipment. Already, ...

Mmm. Very nice. I'm still looking for the balance between not obscuring the utterly depressing aspects of life while still maintaining a positive tone, but it appears that you have ...