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I like the way it starts out with a conjuction, because it seems to pull me in right off, but I didn't get a whole lot of feeling, a whole ...

Ohhh... Smaur, you've blown me away. I don't think I've ever read anything of yours before, but Snoink's ravings have all been true; you're fantastic. You must have edited the ...

It seems like you were kind of in a hurry when you wrote this, because there are more minor mistakes than you normally have, and it is very, very short, ...

Hey, nice work overall, just a few comments. :D One general comment is that you should put a full space between paragrapsh; indentations makes my eyes hurt while I'm reading ...

Ode to the calculator! :mrgreen: Wow, Grif. It brought a tear to my eye... I think I shall have to sing it to my sisters and see what they think. ...

Wow, Jack, just wow. My first reaction is the same as CL's: "Oh, mercy. Where's a tissue?" Like Kay Juran said, I love your use of short sentences, because most ...

Ooh, CL I loved this. :D I liked the lack of punctuation and capitalization because all the words flowed into one another so beautifully, and your line breaks seemed so ...

I'm a christian so i don't like improper facts that could confuse people or guide them from the truth like it does. But i'm sure it's agood FICTIONAL book to ...

Very good overall. A lot of times rhyming (to me) seems to make things more cutesy, but the rhyme scheme here felt ironic. You were dealing with such a tragic ...

My first thought at the end of this poem, "Heck yes!" So very nice work overall. A couple of nitpicks and comments, etc.: I read it through about three times, ...

This was cool. It was verging on crossing that line of over-sentimentality, but I think you toed it pretty well. My favourite line was "you're glowing." I wasn't expecting it, ...

Bravo! I feel the same way. So often, I take myself or a situation too seriously because it's "well, I'm going to college in a couple of years and I ...

Just a question: haven't any of you LOTR haters had to read books like the Odyssey and the Scarlett Letter in school? I'm wondering because the way you talk about ...

I'm not too sure how I feel about the end, but I reeeeally like the beginning. A lot of times it gets on my nerves when people can't pick either ...

You really should expand this... Make it seem a little less rushed, use those great parody sayings where you leave nothing unmocked. This made me smile, but I think it ...