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Hi Jane! I agree with KatTrain, that this was more of a release than a crafted explanation of how you're feeling. And while raw emotion certainly has its place, the ...

Hey there! What I like about this piece is that it's short. Shorter is almost always better; you stand a much better chance of not losing your audience when you're ...

Hey Kylan! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Here are my thoughts: LOVE. Srsly. I'm really not inclined to go back and do a hawk-eyed, picky ...

I hate to say it... but I am still totally lost. I have a few main gripes, but mostly there's just a huge "wtf?" bubble floating over my head right ...

Hi Hannah! Sorry for the very late review; West Point has eaten my life this summer, but here I am at last, as promised. I hate to just agree with ...

There should be an "epic like" button for things as epically like-able as this. Your creativity never ceases to amaze me, Cal! The fonts and pictures and colors all look ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a bit to get here for your review; finals week was an utter nightmare. First impressions I'm not really sure how the picture ties ...

Hey there! Sorry it took me a while to get to this. Finals sort of ate my life for a while there. :) Nitpicks They sat down across from either ...

I agree with your first two reviewers that you could definitely use some more detail in this piece. I got the feeling that I knew what you were going for ...

Hey Sela! This was a really well-written story. I was interested the whole way through, and found myself leaning forward toward the end, wanting to know what was going to ...

Hi Ikafe! Here are my thoughts on this piece: Introduction I know it's tempting to give a few basic facts about the story beforehand, but your story can do that ...

Hey, Forestqueen808! Let me first say that I am a big fan of romance. I like it when the guy gets the girl (or vice versa). I like happy endings. ...

Cutting is a serious issue, so kudos to you for being willing to cover some sensitive material. However, when dealing with these kinds of issues in this way, you have ...

Hey Creative Freak! I agree with Jas - check out some poetry to get an idea of how it's different from just a string of phrases and emotions. Even if ...

Hi DirrtyMoney! No need to be shy; everyone here is ridiculously friendly. We don't bite (I'm pretty sure the only ones who do have had their shots anyway :P). I ...