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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Message from Within

    Not every haiku has to be just 3 lines. Use this structure for other stanzas next time.

    Dec 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Green Flowers

    A pregnant void. Speechless.

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Quite Laughable

    This is very rude. Maybe a bit too rude? But I like it.

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Cholerparagon - Profile

    Best. Dragon. Ever.

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Suicide Note

    ...Whoa. Just wow. That was brilliant. I loved it. Speechless. Just...speechless. You have opened my heart.

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cuts.

    Love love love it!!!! What more is there to say?!

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mourning.

    Whoa.

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Window

    Edited :)

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Thank you for the review :) Take note that during the writing of this poem, I wasn't your most happiest person, so I really had no plan in my head ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Time For Revolution

    Yes.

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Just The Five Of Us

    Don't worry- it's posted now

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: F*** you

    Actually I'll take back my last comment. So, this was...a rant? I must've misread. I thought this was going to be something in the style of something. But this is...a ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Richey Edwards

    Anytime mparq :) The Holy Bible is so badass isn't it?

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: "No Longer Online"

    PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!LET THEM GET BACK TOGETHER!PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    Unsocialbutterfly, this was written around about 2 years ago. I did show it to her :)

    Jul 31, 2011


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines