ArcticMonkey

Hi Birkhoff, here as requested! :) So, I'll start off with what I liked about this piece. I agree with Olive that having two points of view was super effective. ...

Hi Liaya! So I thought this was a pretty cool start for a story. What I particularly found interesting at the beginning was the fact that the Queen of Winter ...

Hello, gia! As one of your first pieces of writing, I thought this was really good. You use really emotive language which makes me feel really sorry for this character ...

Hiya dark! I've always really liked your lyrics, so anyways I'll start off this review with what I liked. I think the whole metaphor of 'paper airplanes' is really good ...

Hi Strange! As a lover of the music of the 1980s, I just HAD to review this piece. I have to say, I didn't get all the references, but most ...

Hiya bird, here to review your piece! I think the style you've written in does a great job is drawing the reader in and making them want to read on ...

Hi again, toboldly! I can totally relate to this. Unfortunately, I don't listen to Owl City, but the whole dreams thing is something I think about all the time. I ...

Hi Lord! Here to review your story. So generally, I thought this was really well written! I was particularly fond of the pacing, and yeah I just think it worked ...

Yo, steph! ...I can't pull off saying 'yo' can I? :P. Anyways, I'll jump straight in with this review, I'll admit that this may have to be a shorter one ...

Hi toboldlygo! So I agree with AE, when I was reading this I was like 'uh-oh, another cheesy love prose' but by the end I was pleasantly surprised. I thought ...

Hi! Now this chapter was really interesting! You dived straight in with the action which is great, and I also kind of understand the supernatural characters a bit more? The ...

Hello! So, I'm going to jump straight in with the positives. Well, we learn a tad bit more about the characters, which is good, and more about the main character! ...

Hey again! So I'm a bit confused as to why this is a poem, and not another piece of prose, but I can see how it relates to the rest ...

Hey again, Tulip! So as always, I'll start off with what I liked about this story. I like how the story progressed from the previous chapter, and I guess it ...

Hey Tulip! So I saw chapters of this in the Green Room, so I thought I'd review chapter one before going onto the others. I think your biggest strong point ...