ArcticMonkey

Heya, here to review! Overall, I think the message behind this poem was sort of clear, but at the same time left me something to think about. I liked your ...

Hey! Here to review! Alright, so I did think that this piece had a lot of imagery and I could really picture what was going on in my head. Well ...

Hey! Here to review. Alright, so for now I'm going to ignore the fact that this has no meaning, but I know you weren't looking for a meaning. But I ...

Heya, here to review as requested! Firstly, I really enjoyed the descriptions that you used within this piece, I think that they were very emotive. I also think that you ...

Hey hey hey! Here to review! Okay, I really enjoyed reading this poem. 32 Stanzas and I was excited to know what was happening next. Boy , that sounded fake! ...

Hey, lizik. Here to review! So, if I'm being honest, I can't say I enjoyed this story. I understand what you were going for here, trying to be 'Santa', but ...

Heya RinSuru! Here to review! Alright, so when I first read this I found it rather interesting because of all the wise words put into this. But what I don't ...

Hiya, Hope! Here to review. Overall, I really did enjoy reading this because I kind of found it intriguing (sorry for spelling) to read. I also think that you used ...

D'awwe, Solvaa, this is really good. I'm afraid I can't really give you a review on this because long story short, I stink at reviewing poetry. But yeah, I really ...

Hey! Here to review! :D I'm going to start by reviewing the first part (when they are ten). Okay, so when I read the first paragraph I thought, this story ...

Hey! here to review ;) Grammar in the spoiler: Meanwhile , fires devastated the other half of Australia. You missed a comma. It didn’t rain, it poured. None stop for ...

Yo, Spire! Here to review :D Alright, I generally like the language that you used in this poem because it really made it match the topic that you were talking ...

Hey Ben! Sorry, this is rather late, I've been kinda busy. On to the review! Alright, so I read this through quite a few times to get the feel of ...

Yo, Lauren! I thought I'd review this, bare in mind I'm not that good at reviewing poetry. And from now until this review is over, I'm not your friend. Just ...

Hey, hey to review as promised! *glomptacklesattacksshootsscreamscries* You called a character Tamara, D'awwe ;) Anyway, let's go on with the review... Generally, I did enjoy this. I was reading it ...