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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Time

    Hello doodlegirl! Here to review! :D Okay, so what I really liked was the actual concept, or idea of this; because I think it was really clever and had a ...

    Jan 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: An Unusual Trip

    Hello CrazyGirl! Firstly, welcome to the site, hope you're liking it so far :) Now, I can see you've gotten quite a few reviews so far, so I hope my ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Sky is Never the Same

    Hi yubbies! Here to give you a review! :) There are a few nitpicks in the spoiler: . A scream echoed through the field, louder than the bombs that were ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: My Dearest Walter(revised...again)

    Hiya! My deepest apologies for the lateness. I did read it on Thursday and now I've seen you've revised it xD. The review will still go on, and now I ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Father was Buried

    Hiya! Here to review as requested:) I found this story captivating right from the first few paragraphs and I think it was an overall very good read. The story I ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Prototype (stick man playing alone outside)

    Hiya! Sorry for the lateness, but here is the review as requested :) Firstly, I'd like to point out that this is one of the most powerful poems I've read ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Two Weeks Notice 2.2

    Hey, here to review! So, I thought I'd get up to dat with all these scenes and I gotta say, this is a REALLY good script so far. The characters ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Escape: Chapter One

    Hello! Here to review per request! :) You've already gotten two good reviews, so I hope that I'll help! Nitpicks and grammar stuff in the spoiler: He had a little ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Level Up! (Scenes 1-8)

    Hello, here to review per request! (Sorry for the slight delay!) On with the review. INT. RAYNER’S ROOM - EARLY MORNING BEEP! BEEP! RAYNER’s eyes open. He hits his Pikachu ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Immortal

    Skinsy! Here to reivew! Alright, just before I start, sorry if I'm a little shaky, I haven't reviewed anything in a good while :) You seem really worried about this, ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ***No Title Yet!***

    Hiya, penprincess! Here to review :) I think the first thing that I noticed was your first paragraph. It's too big! Remember, to try and start a new sentance when ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Post deleted

    Hello NafeCT! Here to review(: Overall, I do like the general idea of this little piece. I mean loving youself for who you are is the way to go, and ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Outside, Inside

    Hey Idraax! Here to review as requested; sorry for the wait. Overall, I personally didn't like the poem. This doesn't mean your a bad poet, I just think it needed ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Call Me Mr. Ailuro~(1.1)

    Hello Shrubs :3 Okay, I'd quickly like to bore you with a story because I know you're gonna read this because you're cool like that. As you know, I took ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Behind The Cloud Of Dreams

    Hello! I'm sorry for the wait, and it seems that you've gotten some pretty good reviews already, so I hope to be of some sort of help. Overall, I think ...

    Apr 15, 2011


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