ArcticMonkey

Hi Secrete! From what I read at the beginning to the end, well I really wasn't expecting that! What started off as like a happy love story turned into something ...

Hiya anshira! I had to scroll to the bottom of the Green Room for this, I'm sorry that it's taken so long to get a review. It's been a while ...

Hey Sarah! I think it's good how here Kayla is finally questioning the appearance of this talking wolf, because in previous chapters it seems like she was just accepting that ...

Chapter 5! I'm finally here to save this work from the Green Room, I'm glad to have read the previous chapters as they were very interesting. I think this chapter ...

Guess who's back! So I'm just going to jump in straight with improvements/suggestions this time because I realised I left something out in the last chapter. I'll talk about what ...

Hello! As always, I'll start off with the positives. I think we learnt a lot about this character which was your intention, and reading your note at the bottom, you ...

Hi again, Sarah! Okay, so I think again the descriptions here were really good and to a good length. I also liked how we learnt more about Sarah and about ...

Hi Sarah! So I saw later chapters of this in the Green Room so I thought I'd review the first ones before going onto the other ones. I''ll start off ...

Hi Carlito, here to review your lyrics! I'll start off with what I liked, and that's that I thought this actually worked really well as a song. Like I've seen ...

Hey again, Moonlight! Since I really enjoyed Walls, I thought I'd come back to review something else of yours- also I thought I'd try and save it from the Green ...

Hi Moonlight, here to review your prologue! Wow! I agree this was so intense and intriguing and just wow. I really enjoyed reading this, it was so chilling but so ...

Hi smile! Here to review your song lyrics So, let me start off with what I liked about these lyrics. They are pretty short but I'll do my best to ...

Hi Roundsquare! Here to review as requested :) I'll start off my review with what I liked about this. I think that the ending is good because it leaves the ...

Hi heclegehog! Here to review your poem. Okay, so I'll start off this review with what I liked about this piece. I agree that this is a topic that isn't ...

Hi uncletyoyo! Here to review your story, it's been a while since I've reviewed something so bare with me, but I'll try my best to help you here :). So, ...