Aravind

Very constructive feedback. Thank you! I've already written the second episode (oops). But yes, the characters will develop along the way. It's why I've written them as a series.

Hi Arouet, thanks for your review. Actually if you search up the word "dumb" it doesn't only mean something on the lines of stupid - but also "mute". I picked ...

Great review of my work. No, I won't take away your freedom of speech - we all have the rights to express our thoughts to one another. Just so I ...

Thanks for your support :)

Yes, I mentioned earlier that you had used proper English. Pardon me for mentioning old English. Please do pardon me for misunderstanding the sole message of this piece. I was ...

Thank you for your review!

Thank you so much. This a very constructive review of my work. I'll make sure I work towards making my writing better. Yes, I'm thinking about writing the second part ...

Thanks for your continuous support :)

Thank you! :) :)

It's still a piece of good quality. Keep it up :)

Hi Eros, Thank you for your feedback. I'm happy to hear about my concept working out. Yes, I'll make sure I translate the chinese dialogues, as well as capitalizations.