ArahniaSiddel

The creation There was a time before man and before the gods, a time even before Earth. In this time there was nothing. A vast black abyss of endless proportion ...

I love the rythm and beat. I have a few things I would change, but I love it. :) I think I'm in love, When I first read this I ...

Chapter-2 The train was moving to and fro, giving me jerks now and then. I pressed my head against the window, and scrunched shut my eyes for a second. The ...

I am not sure what the exact temperature was, but I’m sure it was something above forty degree Celsius. It was enough to extract every ounce of energy out of ...

Comments in red :) Today I Learned in Biology This was my favorite. Probably because I don't feel like being deep right now, but still :). I love that you ...

I loved this. I had the song playing the background and all the lines worked as far as I can see. I was trying not to laugh the whole entire ...

I don't have time to do a long review, but this is what I didn't like most: This is all new to me, But please just promise me, That you'll ...

ziggiefred said that she didn't get the meaning. I think you ment to say that once all the pain is gone you are nothing. A husk. As for the structure ...

Though I do not agree with the statement I think it is a fairly good poem. But, your rhyming scheme is all over the place. You need to be more ...

I really like this poem though sadly I have never loved a guy before.

I really like this poem. It could be a little longer, but it doesn't need that. The second stanza kind of jolted me out of my trance you made with ...

I Love this

I agree, the first line should go. I also think the second to last line should go. Transforming all the old to new. I don't really know why I would, ...

First, I don't know anything about poems. I just pretend like I do :D Anyway I read this poem 3 times, and I think it is really good. It doesn't ...

Hi, you are going to love this sight. As long as you don’t mind nitpicks that is. I agree with Biffle1 you are very talented. But, I also agree with ...