ArahAkachi1

Aaah thanks for this. I will patch this up soon. I am still working on this though and plan to be finished by the end of the year.

I'm in love with this so far. Can't wait to read more.

Ok, I attempted to fix it, and used what you suggested to add. Hope it's better. And Don't forget about Chapter 2 and the Prologue.

Ok, and Thanks for the reviews!

I'll fix more at home. And about the part with the boy or girl. There was either a boy or girl at each location.

I never read that, maybe I should. Anyways, I'm starting outline tomorrow when I have free time at school, and should have it finished by either Wednesday or Thursday. Then ...

Hey thanks koko! Is this the same KoKo/Cookie I know?! Anyway, I am probably starting outline Friday since I'm not going to school.

And the motivation is somewhere earlier in the novel if it becomes it.

Thanks, I wrote this a few weeks ago at school. If I get a few more nominations for novel, I shall start it when I outline a bit.

Just read all of these (In accordance to the storybook to get an idea on what your character's back story is) and I must say, really good. Waiting for more.

And I'm glad you liked it. I'm going to go on and fix Part 2, in case you want to read it.

Hey, thanks for the help Toby, I'm going to go and fix it up.

Really good! I'm already hooked. Only problem is, what do you mean by a lightening bind? When Adero got the kitten, the owner mentioned a lightening bind. Can you explain ...

1. Ok, so they are basically humans with supernatural abilities. 2. The moon plays a big part since Felan and Maple, they can transform into wolves since they have a ...

This is a really good poem. You have a really good gift in writing poetyry, while i have no good skill in writing poetry. Keep up the good work ~Arah~