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Hi Manisha, thanks for the comments :) You're right about the amnesia information, I realized that it would be a lot more natural and clear if Gail had acknowledge and ...

Oh yes good that you pointed that spatial confusion there. Isaac is actually in a fully functional campus, sort of like a university so it comes with an infirmary. Guess ...

Thanks Lozz for the compliments!

Alright, point noted and I'll see what I can do for this and the next chapters :)

Ah I get it, thanks Manisha!

Hey Cailey no need to apologize for not reading the rest :) As long as it can get you hooked! And horray! I succeeded with the main character haha! Do ...

Hey Arctic! Thanks for reviewing but it's alright if you haven't read because what I hope to achieve is to make it so interesting you will refer and read other ...

Hi Manisha, thanks for the kick-ass review! I will take note on the technical stuff but also the ellipsis kind of adds a mysterious value to Raine. Do you concur? ...

Hi Valkyrie, thanks for the review! Your technical pointers are good for me to follow ;) Also I think I would leave most of the chapter in confusion now haha ...

Hi Winter! This is great! I don't mind the annoyance because without them I won't be writing great stories haha I agree with your points on punctuation and structure but ...

Hi HT! I'm glad you pointed out some issues like the time and location heading, because I assumed readers would just see it as insignificant to know every small detail. ...

Hi HT! Thanks for the great review! Yes the opening 'You have a choice' is actually part of the book, written as sort of opener before readers turn the next ...

No problem Maximilia! And I sadly only know how to say 'your welcome' in two languages...soon three haha! All the best for future works!

No problem man! Poems are not my thing but if there's a need to review, I shall rise to the occasion :D

Haha no problem! I keep getting the impression they are highly mechanical or somewhat hybridized lol oh and for a better idea of action sequences or making dramatic pacing, you ...