AquaMarine

Hey there, Irish! Here as requested. Ok, so first off this was a lovely piece of writing! The overall tone and feeling of the piece was wonderful. You have a ...

Hey Kammie! Well I've never actually read The Scarlet Ibis, so I'm sorry if this review isn't too helpful on the comparitive side of things. We looked up to the ...

Hey there! Here to review the second part. Nitpicks: "Uh, sorry that happened. I wouldn't mind seeing pictures, I can just see Emily growing up without a mother, like me. ...

Hey there! Here to review as requested. You've already got quite a few reviews on this one so I'll just see if there's anything I can pick out. Finally, the ...

Hi there! Here to review as requested. I'd just like to say that I have no idea what Kingdom Hearts is, so I won't be looking at how well your ...

Hey there! Here as requested. Ok, so before I begin I just need to say that I haven't ever heard of SSBB, so this isn't going to focus on how ...

Hey there! Here as requested. Ok, so firstly I'm going to go over nitpicks in this. Although when I read through there were very few - you've eliminated most of ...

Hey there! Here to review as requested. Nitpicks: Soothing melody of the autumn springs, I think it might be better if you say "The soothing melody of Autumn springs." Just ...

Hi there! Here as requested. Firstly, nitpicks! I lay here alone, lonesome, without hope to look forward to tomorrow, without light to guide me out of the darkness I find ...

Hello there! Here to review. Ok, so first off I'd just like to say that I think you should change your title. Not the words, but just make sure that ...

Okayy, here I am Katizzle and pretty much on time too. *cough* :D Well, it's inly 9 in the morning so I had to re-read this a couple of times ...

Hey there, here as requested. Sorry it's a little late, you caught me at a busy time! Ok, so Trish has got a load of the nitpicks, but I'll take ...

Hi there, here as requested! Sorry it's so late - you caught me at a busy time! Nitpicks: Almost too perfect . . . Ugh, this line is way too ...

And I don't get a song? *huffs*. :D Joking, joking ... Anyhoo, I would attempt to actually review this, but it's pretty damn perfect as it is. Although, the punctuation ...

Hey there! Moving onto the second chapter ... Nitpicks Knowing him as well as I did COMMA he would surely use the occasion to introduce me to as many eligible ...