AquaMarine

Hey Pudin! Sorry this is a little late ... So, I think that what I wanted to say was pretty much said by everyone else! It's a very sweet poem, ...

Hey there! You have an interesting poem here. Obviously an interesting topic, and some great questions to ask. However, I do have a suggestion for you. Thing is, your poem ...

Hey Howler! I love this idea. Sometimes it can be a challenge to write about love, but you seem to have done pretty well with this! Much like Dems, my ...

Hey there! I loved this, I really did. It's an original poem which has beautiful imagery, how could I not? However, you do need to watch out for this: The ...

Hey there! I wasn't such a fan of this story. Fantasy is always a great route to go down, but you need to watch out for pitfalls on the way. ...

Hey Elinor! Sorry this is a little late. My problem here is the way that you've rushed this, really. I can't get my head around it properly, because you've thrown ...

Hey Coco! Firstly, I just want to say that I don't think you should give up on this. In a way, you're only just starting the main plot here. And ...

Hey there! You've got some good reviews here, so I'll just say a couple of things. I like this poem. You have some really great emotion and imagery in it, ...

Hey Ben! Well, I have to say that I think I enjoyed this more than your last one. You managed to hit on a topic that made for a very ...

Hey Matt! Here as requested. You said in your previous comment that you wanted the reader to feel what love is like. My problem here is that they don't, not ...

Hey Ben! Here as requested. I actually enjoyed this a lot. You have a nice point here, one that wouldn't go amiss in a newspaper column, and you've got some ...

Haha, I loved this in a strange way. It made me giggle. Obviously there is the difference between your and you're, but that's been mentioned. I was also going to ...

I love this, Kammie. You've captured the emotion really well here, and it's beautiful, despite the subject. I would agree with Splodey in some cases; although the longer words do ...

Hey Eddie! I loved this poem, but then again, I love all your poems. I'm still amazed at how many you're managing to write considering the amount of reviewing you ...

Hey Ben! I like this chapter. One thing I'm starting to really enjoy here is your dialogue, that's where your talent kind of shines through. The dialogue generally gives me ...