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This is really good! I haven't read the other "Flameshore" Installments but I think I will. Great Job!

Thanks for the advice! I'll take it in hand! (^.^)

Very good! I saw one comma where it shouldn't be there (Somewhere up in the first paragraph) otherwise nothing else! I really liked it, can't wait for the next one.

Tehe, I hate cliff hangers! Wow this is really good! I really liked it, great job. I couldn't find any spelling mistakes or gammar (I suck at that anyway so...) ...

Great Job! I absoloutely loved it! Can't wait for the next one, pm when you have it up! Review: I couldn't find any mistakes (That's cause I suck at grammar) ...

I liked it but you have to add a lot more than a few sentences...(No offence). I think it has a lot of potential and I can't wait for the ...

Really well done. I loved the way you explained everything and progressed through into a firm point! LOVE IT! Great job!

Thankyou so much from your comments!

NUMBER 4 I want number 4! I don't know about the second one but number definietly! Though for a second haiku I would have to with 7! 4!!!! and 7!

Great job! There was few grammatical errors otherwise great job! :elephant:

This is sad....really sad!

That's really sad.... I loved it really that is so good...

As good as the last. You truly have talent, I found no mistakes so there is no need me to do a full checky thingy! Can't wait for the next ...

Hahaha that's awesome!!!! :elephant:

I read a victorian books just a few days ago and I have to say yours was better than the book published seriously this is really good! :elephant: