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LOVED THAT BOOK! It was like the best. I read it when I was on a road trip. Sure I got sick a lot of times because I can't read ...

I love the idea and all but for some reason the book did nothing for me. Katniss seemed to lack any character. She was so boring to me! I don't ...

Hey, George! I'll be your reviewer for today! I just want to mention that I'll flick through the first and second chapter through this review so don't be startled. :D ...

Hello, welcome to YWS. I: Nitpicks. Melissa was perfect from for him. Alright so a little mishap here. I was starting to think that there would be no mistakes but ...

Welcome to YWS. I won't be your first reviewer, but your second. I: Nitpicking. His legs ached and his stomach was sore I'm afraid you forgot some words here, buddy! ...

I: Nitpicks. Very little people know of it, less even have seen or touched it. I do believe old chum that you have to add a word here. I have ...

Hello, I'm Apple and I'll be you reviewer for today. Sorry if I sound harsh, but reviewing is my trade. :lol: I. Nitpicks and grammatical errors: As I rounded the ...

As promised (and because I'm your Love Child :lol: ), I'm here to do a review for you! I. Grammar and Spelling Corrections Come on e though, you seriously overreacted. ...

Hello, I'm Apple and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I: Spelling/Grammar Mistakes His girlfriend ; Penelope , was standing over a bubbling pot ; suspiciously staring into ...

Hello Scream, I'm Apple - as you probably already know and I'm going to review this piece as promised. I just want to mention that I'm not the best at ...

Firstly I just want to mention; whenever I see work done by yourself I cannot help but read it. I really like your writing style, and the way you suck ...

Oh, hehe, you were right on the length part. But I will percieve onwards because I'm both a coward and will not go an watch TV while there is a ...

I've read a lot of books and I love practically all of them. Though, my favourite would be; :arrow: The Hunchback Assigment by ...........(I truly cannot remember.) :arrow: The Wolf ...

Hey Wookie! Sorry for the really late reply, but I'm here and am finally reviwing your work. What really drew me was the chapter name. I think it's really interesting ...

You really should've posted this in the welcome mat, but hey, I'm guessing that you are new aand I'll still welcome you. So...Hello and Welcome to YWS, the writing site ...