Apple

Hello, Apple here. I like your idea. You have a very unique writing style that draws me in and keeps me reading right to the very end. You also add ...

Hey, Apple here. That was powerful stuff right there. I am listening to a song right now and I think it fits your story perfectly; sorry that's not really relevant. ...

Wow, this is different, I've never seen a novel like this. Are you planning on making it like this for ever on? Or is this just showing the characters that ...

I've read poetry before and none has ever had an effect on me. Literally, I never feel anything. But yours, yours was brilliant! I was capitvated from the very start ...

Ah Skinsy, you good writer you! As always I find myself holding a hatchet ready to maul apart your story only to find that there is nothing to maul because ...

Hello, Apple here. I watched as the man came closer to me and I silently eased the gun out of my pocket and lifted my gun to point at my ...

Interesting. There was quite a large jump between the first and second chapter. Wasn't she supposed to be in a white room with no doors or windows and then suddenly ...

Hmm, maybe, to defeat your dilema you should change to first person writing. Woah, let me just back up there. Hello, I'm Apple and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm ...

I love everything about this story. Its story, its characters and most importantly its plot. You have a wide range in variety and your characters don't stray on the same ...

Wow, that's touching. I've heard so many bad reviews about that movie that it never occured to me to watch it, though reading this I think I'll give it a ...

Firstly hi and secondly scrap the prologue and mush these two together because they just sound great. Your first chapter is pretty small, I'm just going to add, and with ...

Interesting, definitely! I am starting to really like this Celvin boy, he's got the makings of a great MC. This is more of a fan-girl yarn then a review because ...

Woah girl, five chapters in one, that's a little much. Why don't you start a novel/novella and place these chapter seperately; it'll make it a lot easier for people to ...

OH MY GOD, Djinn you have talent. I couldn't pull my eyes away as I read this, I was so drawn in! Holy cow, my lordy, this -- good gravy! ...

Well I love monsters and I love hunters so of course I'm going to pick this story to read! Hello, I'm Apple and I'll be your reviewer today. There was ...