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Re: In my world
Good one. Those 'i's better be capitalized. :-) And the word 'companies' sounds, you know, a bit less poetic in such kind of a poetry, if you get what I ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Train Tracks
That was really good. Such a common incident, these keep happening you know, but such an extraordinary way of describing it. True essence of poetry could be felt out here. ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Perfect
That was a good one. I found the rhymes to be perfect and meaningful. The poem as a whole was very strong and confident. Especially, I liked the last two ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: The way to get girls
It was a nice one. Full of truth, because that's what almost all boys do. Just one thing I'd like to point out. tell her she’s the only one, without ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Remembering you!
It was beautifully written. I love poems that have a mesmerizing finish. And your poem had it. :-) It's something which touches the heart. I especially loved that line, Hope ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: That Night
Yes, I agree with the ones who said above me that the rhyme scheme was not well worked out, which actually made the poem a bit boring. But, the narration ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Kyle
That was beautiful and mesmerizing. It was poetic and melodious. I myself am not a good dancer, so I usually love these situations when a not-so-good dancer wins over a ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Searching For You
That was short and meaningful. It is seemingly a simple poem but the meaning and feeling that lies beneath it is beautiful and touching. I liked it tons! :-D
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.
Couldn't have been better. I fell in love with the story. Especially, the part wen he asks her to marry him, how both of them think the opposite. It was ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Dear Hanna
This kind of situation can be really heart breaking. Especially, when written with so much feelings, you can't help but end up in tears after reading it. The story was ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: The Sadness of Loving
The poem is really very well written. The rhymes added to its sophistication. And if it's really a true story then I'd say such women are a curse to the ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Lust
I liked it mainly because it is something that most people can easily relate to. It's got a lot of emotion and feelings. Something that makes you sit back and ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Reality
WHOA! That was quite daring, I would say. I mean, you need a lot of courage to feel and write that way. Its Realistic, that's what it is. You have ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: The Story of You and I
It was just so touching. And the best part, it ends in a very poetic way. I loved the ending..that desire, that hope. Nice descriptions and word-choice. Good work! :-)
Jul 22, 2011
