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Anwesha

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In my world

    Good one. Those 'i's better be capitalized. :-) And the word 'companies' sounds, you know, a bit less poetic in such kind of a poetry, if you get what I ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Train Tracks

    That was really good. Such a common incident, these keep happening you know, but such an extraordinary way of describing it. True essence of poetry could be felt out here. ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perfect

    That was a good one. I found the rhymes to be perfect and meaningful. The poem as a whole was very strong and confident. Especially, I liked the last two ...

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The way to get girls

    It was a nice one. Full of truth, because that's what almost all boys do. Just one thing I'd like to point out. tell her she’s the only one, without ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Remembering you!

    It was beautifully written. I love poems that have a mesmerizing finish. And your poem had it. :-) It's something which touches the heart. I especially loved that line, Hope ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That Night

    Yes, I agree with the ones who said above me that the rhyme scheme was not well worked out, which actually made the poem a bit boring. But, the narration ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kyle

    That was beautiful and mesmerizing. It was poetic and melodious. I myself am not a good dancer, so I usually love these situations when a not-so-good dancer wins over a ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Searching For You

    That was short and meaningful. It is seemingly a simple poem but the meaning and feeling that lies beneath it is beautiful and touching. I liked it tons! :-D

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss me in the rain, baby.

    Couldn't have been better. I fell in love with the story. Especially, the part wen he asks her to marry him, how both of them think the opposite. It was ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear Hanna

    This kind of situation can be really heart breaking. Especially, when written with so much feelings, you can't help but end up in tears after reading it. The story was ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Sadness of Loving

    The poem is really very well written. The rhymes added to its sophistication. And if it's really a true story then I'd say such women are a curse to the ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lust

    I liked it mainly because it is something that most people can easily relate to. It's got a lot of emotion and feelings. Something that makes you sit back and ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Reality

    WHOA! That was quite daring, I would say. I mean, you need a lot of courage to feel and write that way. Its Realistic, that's what it is. You have ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Story of You and I

    It was just so touching. And the best part, it ends in a very poetic way. I loved the ending..that desire, that hope. Nice descriptions and word-choice. Good work! :-)

    Jul 22, 2011


She conquered her demons and wore her scars like wings.
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