AntonioVidalZ

Hello Lyae, I like the play on perspective on this story. It makes Sydneyrella almost an unreliable narrator. I would like to see the direction this narrative goes. I also ...

Hello Iyae, I liked the hook of this story. Really caught me with the title alone. I will ask why this character lost their mind, brother and teeth. I think ...

Hello Rooke, Reading this piece filled me with optimism and wonder. Very few writers can pull off second person. I wouldn't take that achievement for granted. Personally, like another reviewer ...

Hello Aquarious, An interesting read, never the less a bit dark. You seem to understand your scene work. Your use of imagery is outstanding. I really like the scene with ...

Hello Toastk, I liked your work. I personally think you could rework this as a creative nonfiction piece to really sell this theme of universal cosmic empathy your piece holds. ...

Hello Messenger, This is a good creative nonfiction piece. I would look into the character arch that occurs with you with your Dad. I get that the cycle continues and ...

Hello Juulman, Wow. What a poem! You have defined your voice to a tee. Your language is clear and creative and simple yet vivid. My favorite line is on stanza ...

Hello Elektra, This poem is a bit cliche. I like the metaphor of you being an unfinished draft and that process of perfecting work. Very artsy. I can feel your ...

Hello Khushi, Very good poem. The chalk imagery is strong and powerful. You seem to have a clear idea of what emotion you were trying to convey with themes of ...

Hello Zillah, It's really hard for me to review this piece as it reads like creative work, but it is categorized as an essay or article. What exactly are you ...

Hello Vampricone, I read your piece. It could use higher stakes, more fleshed out protagonist, better scene work, and an overall guided theme. I don't what exactly the point or ...