Anouk

That review indeed filled in more life than what your name suggests :) :P .......I appreciate the suggestions and intend on keeping all of these in mind while writing the ...

Absolutely full of sense :).Often while writing one tends to get so involved that i hardly see the overall picture in details.But,am glad i have honest reviewers .Will do a ...

That is absolutely sweet of you :) thank you so much.

I feel heightened amounts of joy to know that someone actually tried to get the essence of what i wrote.However,i appreciate the constructive criticism for you have also suggested corrective ...

It's good. I like how you've expressed yourself. I can hardly tell this is your first poem, you've done a good job. Looking forwards to reading more. Keep it up! ...

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Hi hi...Thank you for the review. Actually I've updated 3 more chapters in this story, I just haven't posted it here. If you want you're most welcome to read it ...

Thank you for the review. I agree that I use semicolons randomly. And I'm working on that. The other chapters have most definitely less number of semicolons though. I always ...

Not at all. It was quite helpful. Hey if I didn't want the criticism I wouldn't post my work online. So thank you :D

Thank you for the review. I'll work on the grammatical mistakes. I agree completely, I have a habit of sounding choppy. I'll work on that. Thank you for reviewing. :D

Haha...I'm s glad you like it. As a matter of fact, I've already written chapter 2. I'll post it as soon as I have some review points. :D Chapter 3 ...

It's not weird. It's really nice. Well, I've been really ill lately and so to please my parents and the doctor I gave up ice cream anything cold or sweet ...

You're most welcome. :D

I'm glad you don't think I'm weird for saying that. And I agree, Ice cream comes in different flavors and also in different colors. I like ice cream. Even though ...

Wow! That's nice. Deep I must say. :) Good job! Regards. Anouk