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Re: You Know You Have a Crush When....
Good day! I want to say that I really like this poem- it isn't too long, and it doesn't try too hard, if that makes sense. Sometimes you read work ...
Aug 3, 2012 -
Re: Mine
First: This is a very sweet poem, and obviously either you or the narrator holds this woman very dear. I like the flow of the piece, and how the lines ...
Jul 7, 2012 -
Re: Nineteen
Hey :) I want to begin by saying that I like that the title doesn't give away anything; very cryptic, draws the reader in. I like the use of metaphors ...
Jun 30, 2012 -
Re: The Golden Arches of Oxford Street
Hey! Just want to say, having read your poem because the title drew me in, I love it! A couple of my favourite parts: I like the 'yelling labels', and ...
Feb 5, 2012 -
Re: The Decoder - Chapter 1
Hey :) I really like this extract. Overall, it is very captivating, and makes me want to know more about the characters, the mysterious decoder, and the strangely dressed party. ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where Good Men Die #3
Hey :) Well, this review, such as it shall be, won't be too long, I assure you. There really isn't much for me to say- I just wanted to express ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Blood on my hands(edited)
Hey :) I want to say that I really like the idea for the story, about a teenage murderer etc. Your writing style is very distinctive and easy to read; ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Confessions Of A Wallflower
Haha completely agree! :) I think your poem is great, the way it sort of flows, but it doesn't have that same old monotonous beat. I really like it, expecially ...
Nov 18, 2011
