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Re: When Things Seem...
It makes sense in a strange way. You know? I'm assuming you do since you wrote this. But I understand it. I think poetry is anything that makes sense you ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Taboo [17]
I've been following this storry! I love it so much! It's so deep. I would love to know where you got your inspiration! I love how there is so much ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Losing Myself in You
I really like this. I love all the descriptive words and phrases you used. This story is really good. You seem to know and like what you're writing. I would ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: He
Wow, this was amazing. You'd think all the he's and him's would get confussing but I actually knew what you meant the whole time. Just a few gramatical errors but ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Sunday
One, Remembering Sunday is one of the best songs in the world. As wells as All time Low :) My idols! I really liked your story. I see what you ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Juliette: Twisted (1)
Well to start you don't really give the reader much to grasp. Vampires? What? Romeo and Juliet is a classic love story. No need to complicate it with vampires. I ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
Hiya! Well I'm just gonna start by saying wow. This is an incrediable story. One I think you made a wonderful conection with the characters! I love Lucas already and ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Lust or Love?
I liked this story. I liked the plot behind it but I think it would have been nice to know a little more about the characters before you threw the ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: I know you.
Well, I couldn't quite figure out whether it was a girl or boy talking. And I loved all the descriptions but I got lost in it all. I thought it ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The First of Many
I liked the plot of this story. I got confused on party because you threw the name Jesse in there? But other than that I really enjoyed this story. I ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Bikes and Books - Chapter Two
I really like the plot of this story! It's so interesting and easy to understand. Like I said before I usually don't like guy point of views but I like ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Mike Fyler Ch. 4
Yet again you out do yourself!! I absolutely love this novel so far. I love how everything is explained I never have to ask questions because you explain everything so ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: On the Edge
I loved this. It was deep. I could feel the emotions in it. I could visualise everything. I felt like I was there! This was great. This was true? I'm ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: School at Sea Chapter One Part One
Your plot sounds interesting. I am looking forward to what you are going to write next. Are Lily and Luke going to be in the story any more? If so ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: just random romantic stuff...kinda like a fictional diary.
I loved how realistic this piece is. I loved how Chris was sweet and didn't make any cocky comments. You can't really find guy characters that don't do that. I ...
Aug 1, 2010
