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AnnabelleKirkland

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Catch Me When I Fall

    It's very different, but the ending made me confused. It seems like she gave up her own son because she wanted "freedom" and I find that disgusting. She's just going ...

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why the nice guy?

    I've noticed that a lot, especially in today's society. Speaking from a woman's point of view, I am absolutely appalled at what females are doing to men. They want them ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Spectrum

    It's definitely an interesting concept. I've never really seen anything like it. The idea is unique and definitely original, while it reminds me a bit of Inside Out it's done ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I'm So So Sorry

    I know you're probably thinking I'm spamming you with comments, but your work is just so easy for me to relate and be drawn to. The pain and suffering you ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Invisibility

    Very lovely and a sort of harmony to it that flows so beautifully. As someone who struggles with anxiety and depression, I completely understand and relate. If this is how ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Empty & Worthless

    A very nice song, I could definitely hear it with music. Again, I know a lot of people would be able to relate to this. The idea of being so ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Stranger

    It's simple, but executed well. I love that the voice seems to be struggling with their feelings, a double-edged sword. It can be seen at first like a wonderful love, ...

    Jul 11, 2016


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