AnnaKarenina

Thanks so much!!

I completely agree with what you said about the error. It does slow down the flow of the story, and it makes it harder to read. Thanks so much for ...

I cannot believe that I let that 'bodies' error slip!!! Thank you so much for telling me, because its actually an essay for school!!! Thanks so much for the great ...

Thanks so much! :) I didn't really think too much when I wrote this poem. I wrote what first came to my mind, and I liked the overall poem at ...

Thanks so much ! :D

Thanks! I agree with 'changing at unbelievable pace' it could be altered :) Great suggestions :)

Thank you so much! Ofcourse I don't mind! :D I would be flattered:D and yes, it was a mistake, it is supposed to me to haha :D sorry , I ...

Thank you! :) If you read on in the earlier quotes you'll see that I corrected the line : I try do stand but all control flees. It is supposed ...

Hahahah :D Nice :) At least I'm not sprawled beneath a train :D

Thank you so much ! :) Great suggestions :) I didn't really take this poem seriously when I was writing it, I just wrote what first came into my mind, ...

I try TO stand*** Sorry, forgot to edit! :D

Haahahahahahahahaha! Love you xxxxxxx

Thanks so much :) I'll try edit the formatting haha :) Great suggestions :D

Thanks! I forgot to proofread, that's why there's a couple of errors! Will do next time :)

Thank you so much :)