Anma

Good job, its very nicely typed, I love what you are writing about. I feel its very mature and is based on how much peoples life is used on technology. ...

lovely, honestly when I read this it brings tears to my eyes (not literally but you know what I mean). I love the poem myself but the structure is confusing. ...

Its very attracting, i like that its based on real life kind of things. Its kind of hard to fallow though. I'm not sure what is gong on at the ...

I love how you explained it with your words. I feel it would be cool if you use metaphors but that's your choice. Rhyming also might help attract more people ...

Very Colorful, it sticks out nicely. I'm not sure what the word is, or means, but guessing by the colors its a good thing. If its not maybe that's what ...