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Re: The Words I'll Never Say
Hello! ~(-->^.^
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: The Journey of a Lifetime
Hi! ^,,^ This is really good :D There don't seem to be any problems with the writing that I can see! I really like the imagery that is presented here ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Adoption?
Hello! This was really confusing... I don't think I understand what happened '_' Is the kid being given away? I know that poems are meant to be mysterious, but it ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: The sun is awfully dark tonight.
Aww this is sad :( The poem wasn't bad as you claimed! Just sad... Although I'm slightly confused... Is it from the point of view of a bird or person? ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Need a Title
Heyo..."there just machines"... You meant *They're*... *hyperventilates* Oh... What tall boys going off? Fell on silent* ears, not silence... But otherwise it was mainly good! o: Although it does have
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Edward Cullen is UGLY!
Um... Heyo ^o^ I liked the story! :D It was pretty fun to read and interesting. This reminds me of my own experience at school... The teacher made us put ...
Feb 20, 2015