
-
Re: Serenade of Skies
There are so many types of skies. Bright blue of the summer morning, the winds joining it with sighs. The wind joining it with the what? This stanza made sense ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Cody (Part One)
Hi iheartbooks, I'm Anger, your not-so-angry reviewer. :D Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: The Door
Hi, First of all I really liked reading this, even though I didn't find it creepy at all. I agree with StoryWeaver about the fact that this shouldn't be in ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Six)
Hey Metal-head :P Nitpicks Without taking the grin off of his face, Richard took hold of my hand as I shuffled closer to him on the sofa. I don't think ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: The First of Many Part 1 *Edited
Hey Jem, Waking up, Julie Grier didn't need to glance at the alarm clock to know it was too early for her to get up. However, her bladder insisted, and ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Oblivion
Hey H-Dawg :P For a diary entry this was great, it seemed to hit all the right spots. I sympathized with your MC and followed her through her torturous journey ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Dop.
Hey Persephonia, I have noticed that I often find myself stalking your poetry o_O Dop. The ink dripped Again and again Again and again sounds like a bit of a ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Clouds
Hey Lav, I’ve always thought of what touching a cloud would be like. I don't believe this is the best of beginnings, it doesn't exactly hook me into the story. ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Chilly Farm~A Short Story
Hey Shubs, Anger here as requested :D The two round wet eyes saw their owner in the mirror, which stood tall and gigantic in front of them. The eyes weren’t ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Heal. (Chapter Three)
Hello, I'd just like to say that I don't see how this is in Romantic Novels, but I would love to see the development. For a first chapter this was ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Case File #5: The x Residence Day 1 (Part 1)
Hey Leth *waves* Normally mystery/ghost stories like this aren't really my thing but I kind of liked this... Alright, first of all if this is a case file I thought ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: BloodLust - Prologue & Chapter 1 Part 1 [Edited]
Prologue The stars were all that glistened in the sheet of darkness that prevailed above the wildlife surrounding the man. He made his way through the forest, disturbed by his ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: The Couch
Hey Persephoneia You used to take my covers, You used to hog my bed. You used to steal my pillow, Without leaving me a thread. Although, I normally am one ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The reunoin
Tyler Elkins," he replied. Although I'd known it was him the mane name (Unless Tyler is some kind of animal..;) sent a shock through me and I dropped my binder ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Shoe-Box Blues
Bowing willow trees fingers snaring curls of wind to bind baby in his box- I like the first two lines, they seem very descriptive, and make me want to read ...
Aug 11, 2010
