Angels-Symphony

Thanks, Jester ^^ Yeah, this wasn't something I was really planning out. In fact, I didn't know the ending would end up like this. It was more rant-y since my ...

Shina, is it? Well, that's what I'll be calling you now. Anyway, let's point out that I just eat up your writing like buttered toast. It's delightful, and I can't ...

oops, double post xD

If I did have to make a suggestion, albeit a forced one, it would be that the introduction of the sister's name caught me a little off guard--if I'm correct ...

Thanks Vyper ^^ xD Yeah, my old storybook. I started it and made my protagonist, but then as we went along, I began to have this urge to hog all ...

Thanks everyone for your reviews ^^ Yeah, I'm aware of the tenses, and it was fixed. Maybe it just appeared wrong for you guys. And now I shall do a ...

Hey Emma Jane ^^ Shina here ;P And I'll be your reviewer this evening. I'll do my best aside from the fact dinner is almost on the table xD The ...

Warrior, I am once again starstruck by your mad poetry skills. >< Shina *clicks gold star*

Thanks everyone for the reviews ^^ I didn't think a poem about string cheese would be that popular xD No offense to the lactose intolerant readers! And to Jblack about ...

I think there are enough flaws in this document to prevent it from being adopted. ;) xD Trust me Griffin, all governments have flaws and all rules have loop holes ...

xD Thank you everyone ^^

Thanks Anti-Pop and Rosey for the reviews. LOL on the 50 second joke Rosey. Sometimes they do work out better than my 5 minute ones.

Thank you for the review ^^

Hi there! Most things here have already been picked up on, so I'll just let you know I thought this was really good. You have nice flow in writing, but ...

Hey there Shina! I really liked this and it looks like all the nitpicks have been done, but really I don't see anything wrong with this. Usually, when I review ...