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Re: The Truth
close your eyes and open your heart you'll see what others can not you'll see the truth you'll see what was there all along money ain't power TV ain't fun ...
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Re: Balloon
Red latex hides behind spindly branches Latex that once did not hang so sadly --That once was beheld by beaming child And parents happy to have a family. Red latex ...
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Re: All The Faces - Inspiration
Covered faces: can't tell who is who.Impossible expressions you can not read.But what happened those neighborhoods where you'd see open doors and open blinds so everyone could behold "your" beauty ...
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Re: Illusion
An illusion, what is it? is it a trick, is it a drink, is it magic, is it my eyes, is it my mind, is it my imagination, is it ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: .
The blood of life is in the movement, The blood of movement is in the dance. Each shift of an eye tells a story, Woven together in movement's trance. The ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Deleted-
Very good vivid imagry Other nightmares flashed through my mind, searing their selves into my soul. There was a scream to my left and I saw a dream of a ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Hope
Hideous nights weather the soul One day under the surface of a stoic face emotions writhe,tortured by the burning pain and longingthey scream for a second lifePerceptive ears hear Everything ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: All's Well that Ends Well
all's well that ends well very good but u should add italics to all"s and ends a revered line from Shakespeare i think shakespeare should also be italics it's very, ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: The Letter That Started Everything (Excerpt)
this is so sweet! you should add more to it though like what happens if she decided she wants to go out with him maybe you could make this a ...
Dec 6, 2010
