AngelMarie

Skins! this was absolutely amazing! Not that I'm surprised :D As always you had me in from the start! I was very intrigued with the river scene. especially the kiss! ...

Okay this was good, i found my self asking questions though like: 1. I thought it was Friday so why did Rose say we have school tomorrow 2. If she ...

Hey There Wicked! This was really good. Although I felt that the end of the chapter stopped at the wrong part. Maybe add some more to this chapter. Just a ...

Hey there Wicked, Great job! I like that fact how you kept emphasizing how much of a drunk the MC's mom is. I'm ready to see what happens next! :D ...

I absolutely loved this! Other than what was said above, about grammar and all that, it was perfect! Yes the ending was rushed, but if you drag it out just ...

not really my type of genre, but it is really good writing. It was like toy story, but you made it into your own, it was great, even though i ...

I really like this poem! It hits home with me because my older step sister moved out about a year ago to live with her dad. I say try and ...

I liked this a lot. I love the emotion betrayed, I agree with Wickedwonder, it usually is the girl in love, so i think this is a nice, refreshing, twist. ...

This was truly .....I'm speechless! I felt like i was the girl, that's how strong of an emotion you put into this story. I could Visualize everything, It was heartbreaking, ...

Wow, just wow. That was a great poem, no great is the understatement of the year! Bravo my friend, Bravo! I dabble in poetry, but never will i write anything, ...

I love it! I could feel tears filling my eyes as I read it. You have a great sense of imagery, and I could definitely feel the emotions of the ...

I too was drawn in by the beginning. I love the way you describe Jacob walking to school, the adjectives you used were good. I was also posed with some ...