AngelMarie

I really like this. A lot. I was drawn in from the title. I thought it sounded like something I would do. lol. But I like the message of the ...

Hey There! First off I wanted to tell you I love the title. It drew me in, and I had to read it. So that's a really good thing, to ...

This was really good. I like the flow of the poem. "Nostalgia, like memories of being five-years-old, I really like this first line because it drew me and made me ...

This was really amazing :) I love the title, Romeo and Cinderella instead of Romeo and Juliet. It's cool, the ending was my favorite part. Because it's not a fairy ...

I love this! It flows really nicely, and it is the perfect length. :) I'm not really a poet or anything so I don't have a review, but this is ...

This is a great follow up to the first one. I have just got to read more! I love the character of the mom, and love how she's just like ...

This is some really comical stuff. I really like where you're going with this story. I know that you are not really shooting for good grammar and stuff like that, ...

ha I love this, it's great! No mistakes as far as I can see :) really this great :)

I really like this :) I think my favorite line is "It takes more than rain to make a storm." Well anyway I'm sorry this isn't really a review, but ...

This was Stunning! The absolutely best thing I've read all day! I found myself holding my breathe as he slid the razor down his wrist, and heart beat along with ...

I love this so much! I'm not going to say anything about punctuation because i do the same thing. The wording is perfect! "But they shake a little more with ...

I loved this. Mostly because I can relate to it so well. The wording is so strong, and I could feel the bitterness, and sadness growing in each sentence. I ...

Wow. This was just wow! I wish I could write this good at 4 in the morning. I could feel the words as i read them, they were so powerful ...

I love this! The imagery is amazing, i can picture every word in my head. It's amazing how things can inspire you to write, and what ever inspired you must ...

Love this! At the beginning I didn't know where you were going with it, but as I read on I got it. The ending is very powerful, i especially love ...