AngelKnight900

This was very well written and your flow was on point. I'm a christian and I've been through some things that made me wonder and question God and this really ...

This was really interesting. You had actuallly grabbed my curiosity and kept it. What I liked most was that you were able to portray your characters' emotions so that the ...

So many good posts and here I am, as late as ever. I agree with your previous reviewers. There are a few grammatical mistakes that you made and I think ...

i disagree with your previous reviewer. If it's a true story, it doesn't really need more detail. You're just using the info you got. This story touched me and it ...

Yeah you obviously need to look this over because what really angers a lot of readers is when they read a novel with poor grammar. I will fix everything thought. ...

I like it and it was so true. What I will say is that my favorite part is the part when the person talks to their daydreams. The beginning with ...

I like it. It's simple so you're not ruining the poem by being over dramatic. Yet, even though it's simple I'm not able to generate a sort of obvious emotion ...

Wow this was wonderful but I do agree with your first reviewer. I was confused but it was a good confused. I liked that I could feel emotion from this ...

Lol, yah some of those band names did throw me off but it's still good. To get it more, I actually read in a slam poetic fashion and it actually ...

i liked this. I think that you caught the true essence of jealousy and you had all the details of how jealousy feels like to a person, but-yes there's a ...

I liked this poem and I think it's still not done. It actually reminded me of a freestyle poem when the speaker just goes on and on and on but ...

This was really good and what I liked most was the flow it had because it actually ended up sounding like a song. The rhyming was on point and the ...

Hmmm, I like your story here but I'm not too sure about it. I like how you put four perspectives into this and I do agree with you that this ...

I agree with your previous reviewer. I think that you should have start off with the family story which would have caught people's attention. I think that you should have ...

Hmmm, I'm going to have to think about what I said so let me tell you what's coming to mind right now. I like it but I would like it ...