Angel17

This poem will really relate to many people. Some times i feel like i'm not going anywhere, and everything is so predictable. Anyway, your poem is good and the reader ...

I thought the poem was quite good. I agree with comments made of some parts being a little forced. However, i thought the way you created the witch with a ...

Im almost over this feeling covering me like a blanket of depair This is a really good line. I like the way you compare an emotion to an object. i ...

I thought the poem was clever. It had a lot of emotion in it. I like the way you made paper grow up with a human. I really liked it. ...

Excellent! it had a beat to it. I really loved the first part the most. Well done. :) :D

i found it good the way you would write sentences then write one word, it makes the reader pause and think about the previous line. The end lines were a ...

Thats another fate decided by the knife[quote] This is a clever line. i prefer poems that relate to real life, because people are more able to understand and also feel ...

The poem went quickly, i think i liked because of that reason. It didn't drag on and i like the way you repeated 'If it weren't for you i'd be ...

I thought the rhyming was good. The poem might of been stronger if you didn't focus on the rhming and concentrated more on the mood of the poem. But the ...