AnarchyWolf

I didn't research wolves especially for writing this, but it's because I knew quite a lot about them already. Anyways, thanks such a great review :)

Thanks so much for reviewing :) I'll put the corrections in when I rewrite it.

Thanks so much for the review! It raised quite a few things I'd never thought of. It's set in Britain, in modern times, but I never thought of smartphones. They're ...

You're welcome :) I'm glad it helped! -AnarchyWolf

Ahh thanks so much. I'm so glad you like it (I didn't think anyone would). I'll put up a warning and add in that comma. Also, I never got a ...

You're welcome. I'm glad it helped.

You're welcome! I think a hyphen would serve to explain or add further understanding, so I think it could work, depending on the point you were trying to make. -AnarchyWolf

@Shala thanks :) @CupcakesForRealMen thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you liked it :) I'll definitely work on describing Seb more.

Thanks so much :)

Ahhh I've been waiting forever. This was good :) I'll come back and review when I have more time, if you don't mind. -AnarchyWolf

Thanks so much for the review :) I'm glad you like it and I agree with your points. -AnarchyWolf

Thanks for the review and all the great tips :) The name change is down to my lovely autocorrect. -AnarchyWolf

Yesss! He's an escaped slave. But more on that later. Thanks so much for the review! And the name changed to Nikolai from Nicolai thanks to the autocorrect on my ...

Sorry. Should've added this on to my other reply - I haven't seen Ruby or Once Upon a Time, but they do sound intriguing. -AnarchyWolf

Thank you so much for your review :) it was so helpful. I really have to work on insights into the main character's mind. Thanks for pointing it out. -AnarchyWolf