AnarchyWolf

Thank you for reviewing :) Yeah, it really does need work on the description xD I'll keep your points in mind when I write in the future.

Thank you for reviewing :) I'll keep your feedback in mind!

Sorry for not replying for so long! I've only just seen your review. Thank you so much for the feedback :)

You're welcome :)

There isn't anything wrong with being gay. It's natural, actually. 1,500 other species of life has such diversity. It's just us who choose to discriminate against homosexuals. There is no ...

You're welcome :) I'm glad you like it. I agree that as a stand-alone piece it needs more description, but I'm hoping for it to be a flash-back-kind-of-thing in the ...

Thank you for such a kind review :)

Thank youuuuuuu :)

Thank you so much for the interest and the great review. I am indeed in boarding school (this is my 4th year here) and I'd be more than happy to ...

Thank you so much for your review :) I know - it is fairly confusing, but hopefully it'll improve.

Thank you for reviewing :) Yeah, it's pretty confusing... Thank you for the pointers, though - hopefully when I rewrite with those in mind, the prologue will improve.

Thank you for reviewing this fairly confusing thing! I'm glad you like the concept. I'm hoping that my pacing will improve when I rewrite it. Anyway, thank you for reviewing ...

Thank you for reviewing this mess of a prologue :) I'll be sure to take your advice into account when I rewrite, which I hope will be soon. Pacing is ...

Thank you for reviewing :) The idea with Elliot becoming more responsive was that he'd already talked to them before, so he was probably thinking 'what's the point of keeping ...

Thank you for reviewing :) So many typos >.< But I'm glad you liked it!