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Re: Untitled project ~ first 650 words.
I think in the beginning the flow was a bit jagged but this is only a first draft so you shouldn't have to worry about it too much. You did ...
Feb 26, 2019 -
Re: Multi
It's interesting that you don't let the reader know what's exactly happening in the first chapter or why he risked everything to come to that bank. It seems like he ...
Jan 21, 2019 -
Re: Bloodied Mary- Chapter 1
I read through all of this and it kind of reminds me of Supernatural. I thought the end was interesting since perhaps the toilet really isn't clogged or smells bad ...
Jan 20, 2019 -
Re: The Girl Gone Missing.
Hey Auby! Dropping in for a review. I'll try to help with any grammar mistakes or anything else I can find that could be of some use. "The mom ,Angela, ...
Dec 5, 2018 -
Re: chapter 4 change of hearts..
Hi Swetachowdhury0! I'll try my best in this review to point out some grammar mistakes and other stuff to help you. I also thought that the book's setting in Korea ...
Dec 5, 2018