Anabelle

Thank you so much. :)

Yes, of course. Oh, and welcome to YWS! :D

Thank you for the review, Dawny. I actually have a few questions for you since you, like others, said that I should consider making this into an actual story. If ...

Sounds like a great topic for a book! I'll be looking out for it! Feel free to PM me with any questions :) XOXO Anabelle

Hey, Pinkiegirl13! I'm kind of confused on what this is... maybe I'm just stupid though! Are you setting up a character for something you're writing/about to write?

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Hey there! So, first of all, I love the premise of this short story. While everyone is writing happy, cliché stories about the fourth of July you went a totally ...

No problem! :)

No problem! :)

Thanks so much! In the last paragraph, I'm saying I want the kind of love that was mentioned in the paragraph before that. Hope that clears everything up for you. ...

Oh my... so brilliant! Even some of the writings you discarded were good. This was very original and a great way to get out writer's block. Writing about writer's block ...

Wow, thanks! See, I told you short stories weren't really my forte! Im much more comfortable writing like this. Oh, and ill be checking out your work as well. :)

No, I don't hate you! Thank you for being honest. I will take everything you said into consideration and I would love it if you gave more honest reviews for ...

Thank you for your review, Kanome. I don't know if it was completely clear in the story or not, but she chose Hudson. I am considering adding more to this ...

Thank you so much for your advice. I now realize that I need to develop the characters more. Forgive me, I don't have much experience in short stories or fiction ...

Great! I'll check it out.