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Re: Thou Dost Not Compute
I am amazed. Just purely amazed. I never thought people could describe love in a computer sense. I love how you describe romantic touches suche as And strokes on a ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Poem for school
This poem has a pretty nice rhyming lines. I certainly love the message you conveyed. I love how you describe life and its struggle as well as you message of ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Story, Chapter One.
I am struck in awe O.o Your story catch the attention of the reader and have plenty of suspense as well having a tense mood. I really like it. The ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part one
Story was good and i like the mood you created in this part. However the first paragraph confuses me. Mostly on the second sentence “Where the hell is my new ...
Apr 1, 2010