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Re: When The Cheese Attacked.
Haha, well there's an interesting way of getting yourself to write! I need to get my friends to spit out something random for me O_O I liked it, It sounds ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: The sky flashes Zeus’s golden lightning
I really liked this one! The imagery you provided was just great. "The sun shyly searches amid the cloud." -I loved this line =) I enjoy reading your writing! Keep ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: you kill me
This poem was very... blunt and straight-forward I must say, which I liked. I like how this character is ending their life, just to hurt somebody else's. It was pretty ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Just A Memory - short version
This was very touching. It definitely sounds like an older person is saying this, you did a great job with the word choice. I especially liked the ending, it was ...
Oct 6, 2008
