Amylith

will never ran out of ammunition I would change to "would never run out" yet he ran with a speed at admirable pace I would take out "with a speed" ...

Hi! I'm sorry to say that I haven't read the first four chapters of this book, but after reading this chapter, I just might (when I have time, that is). ...

Hey buddy :) It's really interesting how your old stuff is so different from the new stuff, but I can still tell that it's your voice. Anyway, there are some ...

Hi! First of all, I have to say that I really liked the subject of this piece. It's about hurting someone and feeling bad about it after you did it, ...

Laden with ice and swaying in the bitter Alaskan wind , the pines crackled in an eerie orchestra that could be mistaken for the thrashing and snapping of a wild ...

Hey it's me. :) Glad you joined. Anyway I know I just told you this, but this story is really good. I'm jealous. I wish I could write this well. ...

Wow I loved the ending to this! I'm sorry to say that I didn't read the first part, but now I wish I had because I liked it so much ...

This is a great story/excerpt! I love how nice Jett is to Elijah, it's more like a brotherly relationship, and you present it really well. The only thing I would ...

Since you wrote this for English class, I'm assuming that you had some kind of outline that you had to follow and length requirements and all that. I've never read ...

This is a very unique and interesting poem, both because you used two languages and because of the topic you chose to write about. Just now I looked back (because ...

This is a cool poem. It kind of reminds me of one of those nursery rhymes from elementary school that taught you a lesson, but this poem has a sci-fi ...

This is a really interesting poem. I've never read "Whore's Bath" so I can't review it based on that, so I'll just say what I think about this poem alone. ...

I like this poem. It has a nice flow to it and you used a lot of really descriptive words. The only thing I didn't like was that I don't ...

This poem says a lot of things that are very true. It's basically the poetic version of the definition of realism (and that isn't a bad thing!). I like that ...

Awwwwwww! :) This is such an adorable story! And you wrote it when you were thirteen? That's some good writing! I'm not sure if you want a serious critique since ...