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Re: Four- Chapter one
I like the first paragraph you used. "She's going to kill me. She's going to kill me. She's going to-" is a real attention grabber. I would've liked to see ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Journey of Acceptance:Hope- Prologue
No problem!
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: The Last Human: Chapter 1
Cool. I thought it sounded familiar.
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: The Jerikova Wars, Prologue **UPDATED**
Nice usage of names there. I liked how they sounded so unique. But, I would've liked to understand some of the words they used in their ancient chant. Would it ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Prologue/ Chapter 1 (also on Wattpad)
Cool, thanks! I'm still working on it. Any bit helps. =)
Nov 25, 2016