AmorEtOdium

Well, this was short. That isn't a bad thing, in my opinion. I liked the shortness. Also, you made it hard for me to review, seeing as how this was ...

Hi! So I'm going to review your work! If I seem harsh, or get things wrong, I'm really, really, really sorry. I have a big ego, however I'm very young. ...

I quite liked this! I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with this. I mean, how could one say there's something wrong with someone's poetry? I especially like the science and ...

I’m not going to have this review as long as the review before (I am going for 1000 characters, though, because I love to write and that requires a lot ...

Hi! So I planned on writing a review for your second chapter, but that was out of the question, since I had not read the first. Now that I have, ...

This was really, really good. It was short and sweet. Well, I wouldn't say sweet. The ending really bothered me, but that's mostly because I'm used to happy endings. Haha! ...

To be honest, this kind of made me jealous. You used words that, though I knew, I never would have thought to use them in a story. And that's a ...

I really have nothing to say. To be honest, I completely loathe long poems. Most that I've read have been dry and boring. However yours is not dry. It's pretty... ...

I feel that your story moved a little too quickly, but that is just a pet peeve of mine. I feel as if you've told more than show. When you ...

I don't feel as if there is a real reason for the character to commit suicide. She made it seem as if she already had everything well enough, and that ...

There were a few times where the flow was interrupted, and it felt awkward to read, but it was quickly recovered. I was a little bored, yet still compelled at ...