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Re: Daring Frankie: Demon in the closet
Thanks so much! I never really noticed how much I messed up. I'll be sure to take these into consideration and I really appreciate the excellent feedback!
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Two halves of a mother
Well, I was wrong. I asked my baby sister, who is six, if she knew how to play UNO. Next thing I know we are 4 games in and she ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: She's Like A Star
EP stands for: "Extended Play" It is basically a 3-8 track CD. :)
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie Ch. 2. Plz review!
Thank you. Also just to clear some things up, I posted this chapter WAY to early. I didn't even edit or proofread it thus, all the mistakes. Thanks everyone for ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)
Thanks guys! I know I have some crappy punctuation, I'll try to work harder at it and see if I can get any better!
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie Ch. 2. Plz review!
:( The spacing got all messed up! Edit* Fixed the spacing!
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!
I'm also going to do this but, I have a question. Would it be alright for me to write a sequel to the movie "Cirque Du Freak: A vampire's Assistant" ...
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)
Thank you! I will probably now write Carrie's perspective in first person. Everyone is saying it would be better so I'll give it a shot!
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)
I was thinking that people may become confused about the character switch, I debated between telling Carrie's part in first or third person. I thought that if I went third ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: New Story!
Haha it's cool, I wasn't saying you copied that or anything. Anyways, fell free to send me a PM when you post the next part or a reedit, if you ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: New Story!
No problem, I also like Aiden, even though I keep getting flashbacks to A Door Within By Thomas Baston (I think that that is the Author's name) :)
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Determined: The Story of a Beautiful Jew. Chapter Two.
No problem!
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.
I see your point Daydream, what I meant by fast paced was, to me, it seemed like the story was going to fast for the characters to keep up with. ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie. Chapter one: Demons
Thanks! :)
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie. Chapter one: Demons
Thanks beautiful (It's in your name :P) I'll gladly PM you when I post my other part
Jan 21, 2010
