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Amnien

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daring Frankie: Demon in the closet

    Thanks so much! I never really noticed how much I messed up. I'll be sure to take these into consideration and I really appreciate the excellent feedback!

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Two halves of a mother

    Well, I was wrong. I asked my baby sister, who is six, if she knew how to play UNO. Next thing I know we are 4 games in and she ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: She's Like A Star

    EP stands for: "Extended Play" It is basically a 3-8 track CD. :)

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie Ch. 2. Plz review!

    Thank you. Also just to clear some things up, I posted this chapter WAY to early. I didn't even edit or proofread it thus, all the mistakes. Thanks everyone for ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)

    Thanks guys! I know I have some crappy punctuation, I'll try to work harder at it and see if I can get any better!

    Mar 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie Ch. 2. Plz review!

    :( The spacing got all messed up! Edit* Fixed the spacing!

    Mar 27, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!

    I'm also going to do this but, I have a question. Would it be alright for me to write a sequel to the movie "Cirque Du Freak: A vampire's Assistant" ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)

    Thank you! I will probably now write Carrie's perspective in first person. Everyone is saying it would be better so I'll give it a shot!

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie: Ch. 1 (Repost/edit)

    I was thinking that people may become confused about the character switch, I debated between telling Carrie's part in first or third person. I thought that if I went third ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: New Story!

    Haha it's cool, I wasn't saying you copied that or anything. Anyways, fell free to send me a PM when you post the next part or a reedit, if you ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: New Story!

    No problem, I also like Aiden, even though I keep getting flashbacks to A Door Within By Thomas Baston (I think that that is the Author's name) :)

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Determined: The Story of a Beautiful Jew. Chapter Two.

    No problem!

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.

    I see your point Daydream, what I meant by fast paced was, to me, it seemed like the story was going to fast for the characters to keep up with. ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie. Chapter one: Demons

    Thanks! :)

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Daring Frankie. Chapter one: Demons

    Thanks beautiful (It's in your name :P) I'll gladly PM you when I post my other part

    Jan 21, 2010


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge